Hi guys today in wananga we had to write a story about a live size bubble coming to take you to the country you want to go to the most. The country that I chose was japan. Here is my story and I hope you guys enjoy it.
I was walking around and then I saw a life size bubble floating towards me. I was obviously confused who wouldn’t
be if a random huge bubble was right in front of you without explanation.
I was tempted to put my hand in the bubble so I did… I regretted it. The bubble sucked my whole body into it.
I was confused and scared, why would I be sucked up into this huge bubble.
I was suddenly in japan. I could see beautiful cherry blossom trees.
There were people underneath me looking right up at me. I was still confused.
Hi Alexia
ReplyDeleteI love this its good part from it running off the page if you could please change it. I love the way you chose Japan as your place you wanted to go.
from shanaya
Hi Alexia
ReplyDeleteHow are you? I love how you added what your were feeling. Next time could you make it so were can see all of your work. But overall it was amazing work.
- Carla
HI Alexia.
ReplyDeleteThis was a really good story but its running off the page a bit so maybe change the fount or make it smaller but really good story.
-Leo