Ziggle
Brown rainbow braided hair
Rainbow eyes as bright as fireworks
Moves as fast as a cheetah
Her touch is like a zig zag of energy going thru your veins
Carries a tiny teddy bear as cute as a kitten
As soft as a chipmunk she says ¨ let you creativity run free¨
By Alexia
I love your work Alexia.
ReplyDeleteI love the end of you story Alexia.
i love your story it has a lot of detele
ReplyDeletei love your work Alexia you really did a good job on your work keep up the good work
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ReplyDeletewow Alexia your work is amazing how did your come up with this !!!!!
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ReplyDeleteI love your poem Alexia.I love what you have done!
I don't think you have to change anything but I do think you should put in a bit more description.
I remember when I made a poem like this one but different! I like yours better! * smiles.
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ReplyDeleteHi Alexia I love your work .Next time can you add more detail ?. This reminds me of my work .
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ReplyDeleteI love the way you described your character. Next time you could add a video of what you were watching when you wrote the poem.this reminds me of when I made a poem like this. :D
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ReplyDeleteHi Alexia it's Shanaya
ReplyDeleteI like the way you said fireworks it really inspire me
next time could you make it funny
this reminds me of the time I sower my cat when he looked brown.
by friend Shanaya