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Friday, June 15, 2018

Poem

Ziggle
Brown rainbow braided hair
Rainbow eyes as bright as fireworks
Moves as fast as a cheetah
Her touch is like a zig zag of energy going thru your veins
Carries a tiny teddy bear as cute as a kitten

As soft as a chipmunk she says ¨ let you creativity run free¨

By Alexia

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  1. I love your work Alexia.
    I love the end of you story Alexia.

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  2. i love your story it has a lot of detele

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  3. i love your work Alexia you really did a good job on your work keep up the good work

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  4. Thank you bronte!

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  5. wow Alexia your work is amazing how did your come up with this !!!!!

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  8. I love your poem Alexia.I love what you have done!
    I don't think you have to change anything but I do think you should put in a bit more description.
    I remember when I made a poem like this one but different! I like yours better! * smiles.

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  10. Hi Alexia I love your work .Next time can you add more detail ?. This reminds me of my work .

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  12. Hi Alexia,
    I love the way you described your character. Next time you could add a video of what you were watching when you wrote the poem.this reminds me of when I made a poem like this. :D

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  14. Hi Alexia it's Shanaya

    I like the way you said fireworks it really inspire me
    next time could you make it funny
    this reminds me of the time I sower my cat when he looked brown.

    by friend Shanaya

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