Writing Assessment Review - WGA

 Hi guys today in WGA we looked at reviewing our writing test. We looked at our Term 1 and Term 4 test. We had to look back at our scores and see if we improved or went down. After you looked at your tests and reread them you had to look at what you need to improve to get a level higher on the Rubric score. The 7 things you a scored on are Ideas, Structure, Organization, Vocabulary, Sentence, Punctuation, and Spelling. After you reviewed every thing you have to give yourself some next steps so you know what you should do to improve. 

The things I need to improve on are Ideas, Structure, and Vocabulary. My next steps to help me improve are looking back my work more then once so I can fully see what I have done and what I need to look at and look at my structure and what is in my sentence and paragraphs. I need to also learn some other words that are better then just the normal ones so then I can improve with my vocab. 

Creative Writing - WGA

Hi guys today in wga we started looking at a photo, Miss Birtch told us a part of the picture and then told us to describe it. Later on after we did that she got us to introduce a character, describe the character, give a reason to why the character is there, introduce a problem, and then we had the choice to resolve the problem or leave it on a cliffhanger. Here is what I wrote and I hope you enjoy.

The pitch black sky was scattered with stars, the dark brown trees twigs was covered in a small layer of snow. The Trees grew bigger and bigger with more snow eventually covering the twigs. 
The white snow covered the green grass, small pieces of stray grass poke out of the snow, some close to the tree some far away. Small pawprints followed behind the dark brown cat, the cat was as fluffy as it could get, it was no where near effected by snow.

The dark brown cat had pure green eyes, the cat had many black spots arounds its entire body. The cat was for sure curious, the dark brown cat could never mind its own business. The cat was trying to finds its way into the light brown house. The cat looked around every single nook and cranny but couldn't find a single way in, the cat was very desperate now. 

The cat walked around near the front door, the cat could hear something but it didn't know where it was coming from, the cat turned left and then saw a golden fluffy dog. The dog barked at the smaller cat, the cat started running as fast as it could not wanting to get caught. The dog chased after the poor cat. The dog thought that the cat was a toy, the cat on the other hand thought it was going to die.

There was a noise of a door opening and someone talking, the cat took it as a sign and ran straight into the house, the dog shortly followed after. There was a huge ruckus happening inside the house. A human grabbed the collar that was around the dogs neck, and the cat went into the furthest corner. It was quite for a bit, one of the humans went inside of kitchen looking for something, the human pulled out a food can, and feed it to the cat, the cat was confused but ate it.

Healthy Menu - Health

 Hi guys today in health we were finishing off what we started yesterday in health. In health we looked at healthy eating, or activity was to create a healthy menu for the week. This took a bit since I didn't really have any ideas of what foods to put on the slide, as well as finding pictures that would match. Here is my work and i hope you enjoy it.