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Thursday, March 22, 2018

The wacky tale story

The cheese machine  Lucky lulu was sinking quickly. “Abandon ship! Everyone into the _cat bows___!” hollered Captain _Snuggles__. But the crew and passengers knew there were not enough __cat bows__, so they threw __hollow_rings_and even one __Snow cat___overboard. Then everyone _dived______ into the ___jelly___ water and grabbed onto whatever they could.
Captain __Snuggles___ordered everyone to form a line, tie their crafts together, and sing ____Havana_____ First in line were ___Donald Trump___and __Britney Spears___, bobbing in their ___slime shoes___ Next, came __Beyoncé___ hanging on for dear life to a slimy _piece of wood. They were followed by ___100___others.
After _89__days, they were rescued by a strange human _. Not one passenger from the Lucky Lulu has taken a boat ride again.

17 comments:

  1. i love♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ it amazing creative grate awsome butifull discriptive and wonderfull story alexia👍👍👍👍👍👍😋😋😋😋😋😋♥♥♥♥♥♥❤❤❤❤❤❤

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    1. Thank you taylor !.
      I also like the emojis you used

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  2. Love the stry and a great stry delicious description

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  5. I love the delicious description in your story and how to used made up names

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  6. The story is awsome I ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ it so much

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  7. Maybe next time you could take away the lines

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  8. alexia you should rename this story (de beast story on earth :D ) thank youfor lisaning

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  9. I like it it is good but c u drb it abit more

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  10. Ok but this is how you spell listening :)
    No need to be rude but i like corcceting people but Maybe i could !

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  11. this is what Alexias t shist sees b!#`* ima a unicorn hahahaha omg

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  12. Heey alexia great work on the wacky tale but next time u should take the lines out

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