Hi, guys today wga I started working on my 100-word challenge. There were two pictures that you could choose from and I choose to do the one where someone is passing the ball in hockey. Here is my 100-word challenge and I hope you enjoy it.
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I was walking around on the turf trying to figure out what to do. It was kind of boring not having someone to pass to or even play with. I decided that I would just pat to the wall and make it bounce back to me. I did that for a while until someone came up to me and asked if I wanted to play with them. I took the chance and played with them, we passed the ball around a couple of times. A few minutes later other people joined in. After some simple passes, we decided to play a small game
Hi Alexia
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your 100 Word Challenge. I wonder if you can try to include some more WOW words. You have told us a story, but the vocabulary you have doesn't add interest to the story. I would like to see your work stand out more!
Next time please include the photo with your writing so we know what the prompt was.
- Miss Birtch