here is some of my work that i have been doing i haven't finished yet.
BRIIIIING.
The bell echoed through the school building. Callie, Ray, and Shiloh were in Art Class. Their next class was history. Ray and Shiloh start packing up their things while Callie just sits in her chair. Ray walks over to Shiloh’s desk. “Well.. are we heading to art?”. “Huh? Oh yeah i’ll meet you in the hallway”. “Alright.”. Ray turned around and walked away. Shiloh is wondering what Callie is doing. Callie is usually the first one to get up and walk to the next class. Mr. Danil didn’t give her detention he didn’t tell her to meet him after class either… Shiloh stood up and decided not to talk to Callie. She was mean to her anyway. Shiloh opened the door and headed out. She saw Ray all the way in front of her. She took this as an advantage. She snuck up behind him and… WHAM. She smacked him on the back of his head. “OW”. He went down to his knees and put his hands where she smacked him. Shiloh started giggling. Ray and Shiloh had this weird friend relationship whenever they had the chance they would smack each other no matter how hard it hurt they would do it. They found it fun. They found their way to art class. Ray opened the door. Only a few other kids were there. Ray and Shiloh walked to their desks. Their desks were on the opposite sides of the room. The reason for that was because they would talk to each other all the time. The teacher wouldn’t find this a problem if they weren’t good or weren’t interested in art. Ray and Shiloh had some talents in art. Shiloh sketching and Ray painting.
Their teacher Miss. Smith was talented in a lot of art like Painting, Sketching, and sowing. Today they were painting a famous landscape
Hi Alexia
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your writing work to your blog. I really enjoyed reading the beginning of your story. You have begun to describe what seems to be a great friendship between Shiloh, Ray and Callie. I like the way you have the characters interacting with each other through their actions as well as incorporating dialogue.
I look forward to finding out what's going to happen next and how your Horror story will emerge.
- Miss Birtch