Hi today we are wrote 5 ways to improve a simple sentence to a complex sentence. Here is what I did in my book.
Practice ~ Simple to Complex
He went to school.
He went to school depressed.
Yesterday he went to school depressed.
Yesterday he went to high school depressed.
Yesterday he went to high school sadly dragging himself depressed.
She waked the dog.
At lunch she walked the dog happily.
At lunch she waled the dog down the street happily.
At lunch she quickly walked the dog down the street happily.
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, March 2, 2020
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Kia ora Alexia
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your sentence work from today, you did a nice job on making them simple to complex. I like the way you got involved and shared your answers in class.
Keep it up!
- Miss Birtch