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Wednesday, November 6, 2019

Improved Sentences

The astonishing ship skimmed majestically until the unintelligent captain steered into the tremendous tidal and got everyone drenched.




Aahchoo. Albert has an aching sore flu. Albert keeps coughing sniffing and snezzeing and a dreadful headache. Albert feels gruesome. Albert eyes are red and watery. Alberts head feels like 100,000,000 knives are stabbed into his head. Albert feels weak his whole body feels numb. All albert wants to do is watch youtube and drink some hot soup.  

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