Writing Assessment Review - WGA

 Hi guys today in WGA we looked at reviewing our writing test. We looked at our Term 1 and Term 4 test. We had to look back at our scores and see if we improved or went down. After you looked at your tests and reread them you had to look at what you need to improve to get a level higher on the Rubric score. The 7 things you a scored on are Ideas, Structure, Organization, Vocabulary, Sentence, Punctuation, and Spelling. After you reviewed every thing you have to give yourself some next steps so you know what you should do to improve. 

The things I need to improve on are Ideas, Structure, and Vocabulary. My next steps to help me improve are looking back my work more then once so I can fully see what I have done and what I need to look at and look at my structure and what is in my sentence and paragraphs. I need to also learn some other words that are better then just the normal ones so then I can improve with my vocab. 

Creative Writing - WGA

Hi guys today in wga we started looking at a photo, Miss Birtch told us a part of the picture and then told us to describe it. Later on after we did that she got us to introduce a character, describe the character, give a reason to why the character is there, introduce a problem, and then we had the choice to resolve the problem or leave it on a cliffhanger. Here is what I wrote and I hope you enjoy.

The pitch black sky was scattered with stars, the dark brown trees twigs was covered in a small layer of snow. The Trees grew bigger and bigger with more snow eventually covering the twigs. 
The white snow covered the green grass, small pieces of stray grass poke out of the snow, some close to the tree some far away. Small pawprints followed behind the dark brown cat, the cat was as fluffy as it could get, it was no where near effected by snow.

The dark brown cat had pure green eyes, the cat had many black spots arounds its entire body. The cat was for sure curious, the dark brown cat could never mind its own business. The cat was trying to finds its way into the light brown house. The cat looked around every single nook and cranny but couldn't find a single way in, the cat was very desperate now. 

The cat walked around near the front door, the cat could hear something but it didn't know where it was coming from, the cat turned left and then saw a golden fluffy dog. The dog barked at the smaller cat, the cat started running as fast as it could not wanting to get caught. The dog chased after the poor cat. The dog thought that the cat was a toy, the cat on the other hand thought it was going to die.

There was a noise of a door opening and someone talking, the cat took it as a sign and ran straight into the house, the dog shortly followed after. There was a huge ruckus happening inside the house. A human grabbed the collar that was around the dogs neck, and the cat went into the furthest corner. It was quite for a bit, one of the humans went inside of kitchen looking for something, the human pulled out a food can, and feed it to the cat, the cat was confused but ate it.

Healthy Menu - Health

 Hi guys today in health we were finishing off what we started yesterday in health. In health we looked at healthy eating, or activity was to create a healthy menu for the week. This took a bit since I didn't really have any ideas of what foods to put on the slide, as well as finding pictures that would match. Here is my work and i hope you enjoy it.

100 Word Challenge

 Hi guys today in wga we did an 100 word challenge. Th picture for the 100 word challenge was a pool. Here is the picture 

Here is what I wrote and I hope you enjoy 

The smell of chlorine was all around the place, the splashing sounds of water and people screaming were evident as well. We were at a water park. It was a very warm day today and the sun was shining and being as bright as ever. I saw people putting on sunscreen, some having less and some having a lot more, almost making them look like ghosts. I walked around the pool going to the deeper end of the pool, there were a lot of people at the deep end, and less down the shallow. I decided I would jump in.

Maths - ANGLES

 Hi guys today in math's me and Carla did a slide on different types of angles and what they are. We also had to put a picture on so you know what it looks like. Here is my blog and I hope you enjoy it.

logo

 Hi guys today me and Carla finished what we ad started yesterday. Before you had to make your logo you had to look at some things for inspiration, colour pallets that you might use, some other ideas, fonts that might go with your product, and words or phrases that may go. Our business idea that we thought of was  plushies on a key chain. We just saw some plushies and thought it could be cool as keychains. We came up with your logo by taking colours that would look good together, have a symbol or something that relates to our idea and just put them together. On our logo there is a chain symbol which represents that it is a key chain or there is just a chain. Our idea represents Taha Hinengaro because it can be used as stress toy and more.
Here is our logo.

Persuasive writing review

 Hi guys today in wga we are looking at reviewing persuasive writing.  The topic we were given is to write an persuasive essay about te importance of business and enterprise in school. Here is what I wrote and I hope you enjoy it.



I think that it is important to learn about business and enterprise in school. I think that it is important because it helps you in your future in what you actually need and what you want to do when you are older. It just sets you up for the future that is why I think that it is important to learn this in school. Here are some reasons on why it should be taught in school.

It is important to learn business and enterprise in school because it sets you up for your future. It also teaches you how to manage money as well. It teaches you how to not over spend when your buying things, prepares you for your career choices in your future, spending money on needs over wants, making investments that will help you later on, as well as this prepares us for our market day near the end of the term. This also prepares you for when if you want to start your own business you will already know some things that needs to happen and you will be prepared for it. It will help you knowing how to budget when you need it.  

Some jobs need you to know how to do this as well. Here are some examples on why you would need this later on in the future. Later on you could want to go to college, but you would have to save to be able to go. Since you learnt how to already save and more in school you would be able to know what to do almost straight away. If you want to start your own business you would need to know how to manage money and other things, in school you should have learned it so you would know what to do what you need, how to advertise your business as well as knowing how to manage your money on buying what you actually need in order to start.

Those were my reasons why it is important to have been taught this in school because you need it for your future since you would basically use it in  your everyday life, and sets you up for what you want to do and more.